Ok, I was in 2 bands and left them. Decided to make my own acoustic music. Firstly I cant sing and I did sing on this demo. Please dont comment on the shit vocals, just the tune.

thanks!

http://www.picturethis-home.biz/assets/ ... rack_4.wma

nice dude

Yeah i listened again, I dig it.

I like it. And the vocals were reasonably good for the most part, but it seemed to go too high a few times.

I'm a songwriter too man so I'm going to try to be constructive, without being a d**k.

I really like the verses and i think your voice is quite cool actually, but i just don't think the chorus works, its a totally diffrent style than the verse and it doesn't work for me, but its your song man so whatever you think is best. The ending section of the song is very cool too, I'd like to hear some more of your stuff.

Cheers.

David.

I really like. Been writing a lot of acoustic parts lately myself - and you've got some nice stuff there....plus, it sounds pretty original, which is always important to me very good job - my only real criticisms are regarding production, on the bit when the solo comes in...things seem to meld together a little....I'd also probably turn that down a little on the mix, and adjust the eq on it etc....but then I'm not sure this was about getting a perfect recording, Post some more when you've got it!

[Blazingmonga]

This is really cool Hog, I like it.

Your voice is actually much better than you give yourself credit for. It doesnt sound so good in the high parts, but I think it has a lot of character for most of the song.

Good stuff!

Yup - Like Blazingmonga said, your voice is better than you give yourself credit for!

Pretty good song you've got there. Much better than I could do! Also, it sounds pretty decent on my laptop (which has rubbish sound and usually makes everything sound repulsive).

Wow, thanks guys!

Well, I am working on new stuff and will let you hear it in due course. Thanks for the constructive comments, its much appreciated

Really good! Nothing else to say. GOOD!!!

I canny hear yer accent!

Aye defo a good track..

good work.

great demo, im well impressed

let us know when theres more til hear